1.3 What We're Good At
What We’re Good AtMy sister is choosing again, choosingall day on her laptop: colors, sizes, conflictingreports in foreign countries, the crayon-whitelight of the screen reflecting up onto her...
View ArticleRe: 1.3 What We're Good At
Lovely depiction of a loving yet conflicted relationship. The natural references lend so much grace to the story -- the crickets, the clouds, the apples (hard and green as they are) the rain and the...
View ArticleRe: 1.3 What We're Good At
" the crayon-white light of the screen reflecting up onto her face" And that last stanza is to die for! I love the close, conflicted and comfortable sister relationship depicted in this gem. It...
View ArticleRe: 1.3 What We're Good At
It's interesting that there's no communication between the sisters, but the N respects her sister's very different choices/life anyhow. That's more than some people get. I do so love a story under a...
View ArticleRe: 1.3 What We're Good At
This one went straight to my heart. It could be my sister and me (but she died and much too young). It is certainly poignant and speaks volumes without disclosing too much. I wondered about...
View ArticleRe: 1.3 What We're Good At
Wow! I love this. Not much to crit here. I too did pause on "choosing". It didn't immediately sound like work, though as I went further it did. I'm trying to pick out some things I really like, I...
View ArticleRe: 1.3 What We're Good At
Gee, thanks again, gals! Don't know if I'll be able to do much with this one besides know I've written it, but it feels good to have done that. C
View Article
